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Classic and Contemporary Poetry: Explained | |||
The first line, "have tried to write Paradise," provides an immediate entry into the poet's overarching quest. Writing 'Paradise' is not merely about ink on paper; it is the act of rendering into language that which is ineffable, the highest form of human existence or spiritual state. That he says he "tried" evokes a sense of failure or inadequacy, but also a kind of undying commitment to the pursuit itself. The following lines offer a kind of quiet epiphany: "Do not move / Let the wind speak / that is paradise." The notion that paradise could be a mere moment-where the wind itself finds voice-is simultaneously humble and profound. In contrast to the grandiose, often esoteric fragments found in other parts of Pound's Cantos, here paradise is simplified into a moment of stillness and natural resonance. This captures a Zen-like sentiment, where enlightenment or paradise is not a far-off complex construct but can be found in the simplest, most unadulterated moments of existence. Finally, the poet seeks forgiveness: "Let the Gods forgive what I / have made / Let those I love try to forgive / what I have made." This echoes the existential concern found in much of modernist literature; that our creations-be they artistic, intellectual, or emotional-can be flawed, or even damaging. The divine and the human are invoked as parallel entities capable of judgment and forgiveness. It is striking that the poet places "those I love" on the same plane as "the Gods," perhaps acknowledging that the judgments of both are of equal importance to him. The lines are also a reflection of the lifelong burden that accompanies the act of creation. Artists grapple with their art, hoping for the divine to shine through the murkiness of human language or form, and seeking the forgiveness or understanding of those they love for the inevitable flaws in their work. Overall, "Notes for Canto 120" is a microcosm of Pound's larger concerns-both a summation and a surrender. The poem captures the Sisyphean struggle of the artist to craft paradise out of the elements at hand, the simplicity that can underlie complex quests, and the poignant human need for forgiveness and understanding from the divine and the earthly. It speaks to the ineffable complexities of human endeavors, touching upon themes that resonate with universality despite their brevity. Copyright (c) 2025 PoetryExplorer | Discover our Poem Explanations and Poet Analyses!Other Poems of Interest...NOTES FROM THE OTHER SIDE by JANE KENYON THE END OF LIFE by PHILIP JAMES BAILEY SEVEN TWILIGHTS: 6 by CONRAD AIKEN THE BOOK OF THE DEAD MAN (#19): 2. MORE ABOUT THE DEAD MAN AND WINTER by MARVIN BELL THE WORLDS IN THIS WORLD by LAURE-ANNE BOSSELAAR A SKELETON FOR MR. PAUL IN PARADISE; AFTER ALLAN GUISINGER by NORMAN DUBIE BEAUTY & RESTRAINT by DANIEL HALPERN HOW IT WILL HAPPEN, WHEN by DORIANNE LAUX |
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