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Geoffrey Hill's poem "To the (Supposed) Patron" delves into themes of wealth, patronage, and the illusory nature of security and comfort provided by affluence. Through vivid imagery and irony, Hill critiques the hollow fulfillment that wealth promises and the patron's disconnection from reality.

The poem opens by portraying the patron as "Prodigal of loves and barbecues," emphasizing his extravagant and indulgent lifestyle. He is "Expert in the strangest faunas," suggesting a superficial familiarity with exoticism and novelty rather than depth or understanding. The patron’s contemplation of "the lilies, the rewards" hints at his tendency to reflect on beauty and the benefits of his wealth, albeit in a detached manner.

Hill asserts, "There is no substitute for a rich man," acknowledging the societal power and influence that wealth confers. The patron's entrance into a "new province" with new currency, music, and a mere glint of steel or gold, suggests the ease with which he can command attention and respect. This power is further emphasized by the phrase, "Tremulous dreams secured under that head," indicating the dreams and aspirations of others that are contingent on the patron's favor.

The patron's ability to absorb the "inside-succulence / Of untoughened sacrifice" and the activities of his "bronze agents" speculate among "convertible stones" and drink "desert sand" reflect his detachment and the surreal nature of his wealth. The mention of "untoughened sacrifice" may hint at the exploitation and commodification of labor and resources, consumed without acknowledgment of the true cost.

Hill continues to underscore the patron's constructed reality, where "no mirage / Irritate his mild gaze." The "lewd noonday / Is housed in cool places, and fountains / Salt the sparse haze," illustrating a curated environment that shields the patron from the harshness of reality. His "flesh is made clean," a metaphor for the patron's sanitized existence, free from the moral and physical grime that affects others.

In the final lines, Hill contrasts the patron's life with "the unfallen - the firstborn, or wise / Councillor," who are depicted as existing in a state of prepared serenity. These "prepared vistas extend / As far as harvest; and idyllic death / Where fish at dawn ignite the powdery lake," suggesting an idealized and detached vision of life and death. This serene imagery contrasts sharply with the earlier depiction of wealth's emptiness, underscoring the artificiality of the patron’s constructed paradise.

Hill's "To the (Supposed) Patron" ultimately critiques the superficial and hollow nature of wealth and patronage. Through rich and ironic imagery, he explores how the patron's life, though seemingly secure and indulgent, is marked by disconnection and illusion. The poem serves as a reflection on the transient and ultimately unsatisfying nature of material wealth and the isolation it can bring.

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